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#1 Posted : Tuesday, February 28, 2017 7:06:14 AM(UTC)
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but sometimes they don't make senseInstead, I'm writing this for all of us who are working on writing traditional haiku, but may sometimes wonder if our efforts to capture a striking moment may be awkward sounding, sentimental, wordy, obvious, and above all, boring. coach factory online

The next section of this hub is inspired by an essay on haiku and senryu by published haiku poet Kathy Lippard Cobb; the middle section reveals one source of bad haiku; and in the last sections I hope to amuse you by taking some excellent haiku, classic and modern, and making them bad. michael kors outlet online

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Note that good haiku generally consist of two phrases, or a phrase and a short sentence, so this one gets a bonus badness point by being one long sentence.

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the smell of burning leavesThis one also has a bonus badness point: instead of dividing into two parts, separated by a line break or a line break and punctuation, it consists of three unrelated phrases, making it feel disconnected for the reader.

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Of course, you could write, "Cold rain / thinking of the day / you left," cheap jordans free shipping

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As she says about this kind of cause and effect "it's not only boring, it's too obvious." In other words, "Well duh, of course you get wet walking in the rain without an umbrella."
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